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Love it. I hope you will continue this one author,.lots of potential.

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This is turning out to be interesting! It's great! Love the plot and the characters.

P.s. Is Eric Filipino? He used "anak" and I'm assuming that's supposed to be the Filipino term for child...

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Glad you find it interesting and enjoy the plot and characters! And yes, to answer your question Eric is Filipino alongside Villanueva!

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this is awesome so far!! can't wait for more update on the story and the relationship stat for the characters, I'm struggling to remember names thanks :D

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It is really nice. If I may suggest, you should add more tags so it would be easier to find it. :)

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It's actually like watching a movie the way you described every scene every feelings that Mc is going through the whole thing is perfect. I'm so looking forward to this.

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I really enjoyed the demo :D looking forward to more! <3

Thank you Tookie, that really means a lot! <3

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I love the demo so far! It's an interesting premise and I love your take on the whole superhero concept. The abilities aren't the usual stuff you see and their very clever! I'm especially interested in Voider, I wasn't expecting a POV from them. I'm wondering if they're maybe a possible love interest? Either way seems like we can build an interest relationship with them, and unless I understood incorrectly they knew our real name even though they hadn't seen our face. Matteo is definitely my favourite of the others so far, thank you for letting us spray them. Also Pierce and Eric are amazing.  Looking forward for more, good luck with writing!

Hey Nashyra!

Thank you for the kind words, the mean a lot to me as a budding writer. To answer your question yes Voider is a possible Relationship Option, meaning you can romance, befriend or antagonise them depending on your choices. And during your chase with Voider, you do chase after him unmasked, which I'll be sure to make clearer in a future update. 

Once again thank you for reading!

-Ian Lythe

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Cool story! Love it so much! ❤️ 

Thank you so much! <3

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no problem @^@